by Stardust121 Thu Oct 14, 2010 3:05 am
BeastExe wrote:Hm...
You meet the requirements, but I feel the beats are kinda off. But that's just me. Not all poetry need to be on beat or anything.
Anyway. I don't know much about Life In Rublai form. I'm assuming (birth), (uniting), and (death) is part of the style?
the rhythm things makes it have a nicer effect though.
and nah, Rubai Form is just the end of lines 1/2/4 rhyming and having a metaphor. the life thing is just a theme our teacher wanted us to go by. since im doing it on life, i just listed what stages each line was for.
thanks :]
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this would be what a rubai is like:
(First 2 stanzas of Fitzgerald's Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam)
Awake! for Morning in the Bowl of Night
Has flung the Stone that puts the Stars to Flight:
And Lo! the Hunter of the East has caught
The Sultan's Turret in a Noose of Light.
Dreaming when Dawn's Left Hand was in the Sky
I heard a Voice within the Tavern cry,
"Awake, my Little ones, and fill the Cup
"Before Life's Liquor in its Cup be dry."
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